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teryarel ([personal profile] teryarel) wrote in [personal profile] alisanne 2016-01-23 08:58 am (UTC)

Oh my, you almost got me with that prompt (that part which is a quotation about death!), and the way you wrote Harry being exposed to a horde of armed enemies, and then having Severus rush forward in order to shield Harry, throwing himself into harm's way, and you had not yet used the quotation, and - ugh!
Then all is good, no one is dying, and suddenly - bam - there is the Declaration! o_O

Yay, I love it! ^^
Thank you for sharing.

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