Date: 2017-12-21 09:11 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] lyonessheart
o_0 Ok NOW that makes more sense, sorry but with half of the chapter being eaten by LJ, it seemed like you just wanted Serverus alive, for the sake of him being in the story and thus added "one" word into the translation. From "who defeated" to "all defeated" and I was like what why?? (I am not per se against a character not being dead, I just don't like it when there seems no real need for him. Am I explaining this right?)

With the added information that all of Harry's magical essence would be needed to make the cure, the entire chapter reads differently and of course then it makes sense to have Serverus alive, so that they can share the burden.
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