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Title: Actions Speak Louder
Author: [personal profile] alisanne
Pairing/Characters: Severus Snape/Harry Potter.
Word Count: 100 x 4
Rating: PG
Challenge: Written for [community profile] snarry100/[livejournal.com profile] snarry100/[insanejournal.com profile] snarry100's prompt #405: Pillow Talk.
Warning(s): Dialogue only story.
Betas: [personal profile] sevfan and [personal profile] emynn
Disclaimer: The characters contained herein are not mine. No money is being made from this fiction, which is presented for entertainment purposes only.


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Actions Speak Louder

~

“Wow, that was brilliant.”

“Indeed. And...unexpected.”

“...but not unwelcome, right?”

“Had your advances been unwelcome, Potter, you’d not be here.”

“Okay, good. Um, so...was everything all right?”

“My orgasm wasn’t convincing enough for you?”

“Heh. I just wanted to be sure you enjoyed yourself, you know? Because I had a good time. Well a great time really--”

“You’re babbling.”

“Sorry. Just nervous. It’s been quite a day. Your acquittal, then this--”

“Quite a day indeed. So...are you staying?”

“May I?”

“I’ve no objections. Just...less pillow talk, please.”

“What can we do instead?”

“We’ll think of something.”

~

“I told Ron and Hermione today.”

“And?”

“Hermione knew, Ron--”

“Bad?”

“No. By the end of the conversation he was okay. He...heh. He did say he was glad it wasn’t Malfoy.”

“Draco?”

“No, Lucius. Of course Draco!”

“Sarcasm doesn’t suit you. Is there something I should know about your relationship with Draco?”

“I don’t have a relationship with Draco.”

“You work together.”

“We rarely speak.”

“When you do, what do you discuss?”

“Severus! Are you jealous?”

“Certainly not. Now, enough pillow talk. Come here.”

“Planning to make me forget Draco?”

“I’m planning to make you forget your name.”

“Brilliant.”

~

“Minerva knows.”

“Did you tell her?”

“I didn’t have to. Evidently Lovegood told Longbottom during their pillow talk, and he told Hagrid. And we all know how discreet he is.”

“Oops.”

“Indeed.”

“Are you...upset?”

“Why would you think that?”

“Well you do value your privacy--”

“There’s something I value more.”

“Oh? Should I be jealous?”

“Idiot. If you’re not aware of my regard for you by now--”

“You could show me.”

“Come here, then.”

“...mmm, that was brilliant, Severus. And yes, I know how you feel about me. You show me every night, after all.”

“Well I do try.”

~

“Alone. Finally.”

“Indeed. That went well.”

“You sound surprised.”

“Historically, Gryffindor/Slytherin weddings have...problems.”

“Like what?”

“Hexing, typically.”

“Hm. We’ve always been different.”

“Also, I put Calming Draught in the punch.”

“Severus!”

“You expected me to rely on people’s good will?”

“I expected you not to drug anyone!”

“Too late. I didn’t think you’d object to my peacemaking-- Where are you going?”

“To warn Hermione.”

“Don’t be ridiculous. We’re in Tahiti. On our honeymoon. We should be indulging in pillow talk, not Floo talk.”

“But... Is that a grass skirt?”

“Indeed.”

“Mmm. Hermione’s smart, she’ll figure it out.”

“Undoubtedly.”

~

Date: 2014-01-16 10:10 am (UTC)
patolozka: (Default)
From: [personal profile] patolozka
Oh, have I said how I love tales with only dialogues? This was brilliant;-) Thank you for it!

Date: 2014-01-16 06:20 pm (UTC)
fallconsmate: (Default)
From: [personal profile] fallconsmate
there is a country and western song with the title "a little less talk and a lot more action".

that seems to be severus' style, too. i love it! *giggling*

Date: 2014-01-16 07:52 pm (UTC)
dracdauter: (Default)
From: [personal profile] dracdauter
That was fantastic and funny.

Date: 2014-01-18 12:15 am (UTC)
pekeleke: (Default)
From: [personal profile] pekeleke
This one was such a strange entry for you, ali. I don't remember that many dialogue-only drabbles of yours, but I enjoyed the change in form. It allowed you to create a tongue-in-cheek atmosphere for the boy's banter that made their relationship feel both teasing and loving. Wonderfully executed. This put the biggest grin on my face. :D

Date: 2014-01-23 06:20 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] mistmoonstone
I enjoyed this dribble. Just dialogues... and this was fun... and lovely..!!!

Date: 2014-03-10 06:12 am (UTC)
soleo: (Default)
From: [personal profile] soleo
dialog only really does make the timeline fly by. lol
It still manages to include the awkwardness of initial relationships, teasing, playful banter, depth of emotion. very sweetly. cute.

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