Drabble: All That Matters

[alisanne]

Title: All That Matters
Author: alisanne
Rating: NC-17
Written for snape100's challenge: #190: Random facts about Severus Snape. The fact I got was: Love does not hurt. Severus Snape does.
Word Count: 100
Warnings: D/s relationship implied.
A/N: Thanks to sevfan and unbroken_halo for their help.
Disclaimer: The characters contained herein are not mine. No money is being made from this fiction, which is presented for entertainment purposes only.


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All That Matters

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His back arched under the blows but he remained silent, swallowing his moans. He had been rock hard since arrival.

He licked his lips, hoping this could give him all he ached for, all he needed.

Stirring air heralding another blow from the whip, and he allowed the pain to sear him, cleanse him. It continued until the second it became too much, then his master gathered him close.

“Come now.”

“Thank you,” Severus gasped, climaxing immediately.

A gentle hand ran through his hair. “All right?” a soft voice asked.

Severus nodded. He was loved, and that was all that mattered.

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Comments

[stinaleigh.insanejournal.com]

I love sub!Snape.

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

Sub!Snape is difficult for me sometimes, so I'm glad this worked for you!
Thanks. :)

[jaddziadax.insanejournal.com]

interesting O:

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

For me to write as well. ;)

[magalud.insanejournal.com]

I loved it! The need is staggering. Thanks for sharing!

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

Thank you so much! :)

[sassy_cissa.insanejournal.com]

*cries for Severus' pain*

Nicely done. ♥

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

*sigh*
He clearly needs it, though, luv. *hugs you*
Thanks! :*

[mojokilla.insanejournal.com]

Nice and true!

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

Thank you, my dear! :)

[(Anonymous)]

Very nice. Did you have a specific someone in mind for the master?

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

I was deliberately vague, actually. I even made it difficult to ascertain the sex of the master just so that people could read it as they like. :)
Thanks.

[midnightdesire.insanejournal.com]

Intriguing.
Nicely done.

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

Thank you, hon. A bit out of my usual realm but I am pleased with it. :)

[septentrion1970.insanejournal.com]

Sub-Snape is always so delighful.

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

He makes me want to cuddle him and feed him. :)

[soberloki.insanejournal.com]

He does seem the type to need a scourge... poor hostile bub.

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

*sigh*
So true.
*cuddles him*

[dianamoon.insanejournal.com]

He was loved, and that was all that mattered.
*wibbles* Great drabble. ^_^

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

Thank you so much. *glee*

[witchdragon.insanejournal.com]

Guh- so hot, I hadn't read this one yet!

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

Good thing I do those fic recap posts, hm? *g*
Thanks, hon! :*

[moonystone.insanejournal.com]

Wow. I love sub!Snape, when it's well written. Like yours. It always amazes me how many emotions can fit in a hundred words.
Leaving the Master completely obscure makes it even better.
Beutiful.

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

Yeah, writing sub!Snape is unusual for me, but there are aspects of his personality that I can see being perfect for a sub under certain conditions.
Thanks, my dear! :)

[moonystone.insanejournal.com]

Yes, totally!

The problem with sub!Snape is that some people portray him as weak, which just doesn't fit. Keeping the balance between submission and strength is the main challenge there for me. And however unusual it may be for you, you made it.

[sirenprincess.insanejournal.com]

Oh, wow. When I read your prompt, I wasn't originally thinking sub!Sev. But, wow, you made it work. It's actually completely buyable. Oh, can I please be the one to hug him now? Actually, I hope his master is hugging him now, whoever that is. That last line was just amazingly powerful.

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

Oh yes. His Master is currently hugging him because that's what he needs.
And yes, I hadn't thought of sub!Sev until unbroken_halo suggested it. *hugs her*

Thanks, my dear!

[jadzia7667.insanejournal.com]

*purrs* This is a delicious image...

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

Thanks, love! *snuggles*

[whatthefuckbenj.insanejournal.com]

That is one very hot image you put in my head! Thank you :)

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

*glee*
Yay! And thank YOU! :)