Drabble: Where There's Smoke

[alisanne]

Title: Where There's Smoke
Author: alisanne
Word Count: 100
Rating: G
Written for snupin100's challenge: #122: Smell
Characters: Remus/Severus
Authors Notes: No warnings/spoilers.
Beta: sevfan
Disclaimer: The characters contained herein are not mine. No money is being made from this fiction, which is presented for entertainment purposes only.


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Where There’s Smoke

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“Is something burning?”

Remus looked up, startled. “I forgot the eggs!”

Remus ran, Severus following more sedately, only to find him gingerly carrying a pan towards the sink. Black smoke was rising from it.

“Thank Merlin for your acute sense of smell.” Remus coughed as he disposed of it.

Severus shook his head. “My sense of smell is terrible,” he admitted. “Years of exploding potions, I’m afraid. I saw smoke. What about your werewolf senses...”

Remus smiled sheepishly. “That’s a myth,” he said. “I’m no better at smelling than anyone else.”

Severus sighed. “Best we put in smoke detectors, then.”

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Comments

[sweetmelodykiss.insanejournal.com]

Too cute!

[nimielle.insanejournal.com]

Awww!! Hahahahah, that was sooooo dear! ♥ *lol*

I love this pairing almost as much as Harry/Draco :D

[midnightdesire.insanejournal.com]

I cook like Remus does. Forgetting you put something on and then it end up in a cloud of black smoke. *laughs* Cute story!

[firefly124.insanejournal.com]

::snicker::

Going to need those smoke detectors indeed! I just love that you turned the idea of these two having super noses on its head. *weg*

Where There’s Smoke

[koshweasley.insanejournal.com]

LMAO - this is hilarious. I love the myth, fantastic. Oh, and I love your banner:)

[so_severus.insanejournal.com]

awws :)
wonderful

[gingertart50.insanejournal.com]

Aww! Sweet drabble again.

Wizardly smoke detectors, I assume? And what form do they take? (wailing banshee screaming 'Your bloody house is on fire, you stupid git!' at the top of its voice...)

[blpaintchart.insanejournal.com]

Ha! I like wolf with ordinary sense of smell. And the fact that he cooks just like me is endearing, too!

[nimrod_9.insanejournal.com]

Always like the twist!! I hope this means the other myths surrounding the size of potion master's nose are still true!!

[cordeliadelayne.insanejournal.com]

Aw, cuteness :D

[iamisaac.insanejournal.com]

*g*

This is such a happy-making drabble :)

[countess_hp.insanejournal.com]

Nice

[calico_jynx.insanejournal.com]

Haha, I love fics that dispel werewolf myths :D
*sniffs them* ya they haz gud flavor :*

[lackofmendacity.insanejournal.com]

Ahahaha, poor blokes, and both completely useless. *giggles helplessly*

Cute to know they have to resort to Muggle devices. :D

[witchdragon.insanejournal.com]

tee-hee

[ktoth04.insanejournal.com]

OMG LOL!