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Title: Where There's Smoke
Author: [insanejournal.com profile] alisanne
Word Count: 100
Rating: G
Written for [insanejournal.com profile] snupin100's challenge: #122: Smell
Characters: Remus/Severus
Authors Notes: No warnings/spoilers.
Beta: [insanejournal.com profile] sevfan
Disclaimer: The characters contained herein are not mine. No money is being made from this fiction, which is presented for entertainment purposes only.


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Where There’s Smoke

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“Is something burning?”

Remus looked up, startled. “I forgot the eggs!”

Remus ran, Severus following more sedately, only to find him gingerly carrying a pan towards the sink. Black smoke was rising from it.

“Thank Merlin for your acute sense of smell.” Remus coughed as he disposed of it.

Severus shook his head. “My sense of smell is terrible,” he admitted. “Years of exploding potions, I’m afraid. I saw smoke. What about your werewolf senses...”

Remus smiled sheepishly. “That’s a myth,” he said. “I’m no better at smelling than anyone else.”

Severus sighed. “Best we put in smoke detectors, then.”

~

Date: 2007-09-08 05:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Heee, thanks! :)

Date: 2007-09-08 03:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nimielle.insanejournal.com
Awww!! Hahahahah, that was sooooo dear! ♥ *lol*

I love this pairing almost as much as Harry/Draco :D

Date: 2007-09-08 05:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Hehehee. Thanks, sweetie! *snuggles*
And yes, my H/D friends usually like this pairing a lot. :)

Date: 2007-09-08 10:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nimielle.insanejournal.com
It's a bit like getting rid of Snape in a nice way... isn't it? *lol*

Date: 2007-09-09 02:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Yes, it sort of is, that's true. :*

Date: 2007-09-08 03:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] midnightdesire.insanejournal.com
I cook like Remus does. Forgetting you put something on and then it end up in a cloud of black smoke. *laughs* Cute story!

Date: 2007-09-08 05:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
*snicker*
No comment. *looks innocent*

Thanks, hon! :)

Date: 2007-09-08 05:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] firefly124.insanejournal.com
::snicker::

Going to need those smoke detectors indeed! I just love that you turned the idea of these two having super noses on its head. *weg*

Date: 2007-09-08 06:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
LOL. Yeah, I just had to buck the trend. *g*
Thanks so much! :)

Where There’s Smoke

Date: 2007-09-08 05:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] koshweasley.insanejournal.com
LMAO - this is hilarious. I love the myth, fantastic. Oh, and I love your banner:)

Re: Where There’s Smoke

Date: 2007-09-08 06:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Hehehehe, yeah, I had to buck the trend, you know me. *g*
Thanks, luv!

And yes, I am IN LOVE with my new banner. *drools*

Date: 2007-09-08 06:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] so_severus.insanejournal.com
awws :)
wonderful

Date: 2007-09-08 06:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Yay! Thanks so much, my dear! *g*

Date: 2007-09-08 07:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gingertart50.insanejournal.com
Aww! Sweet drabble again.

Wizardly smoke detectors, I assume? And what form do they take? (wailing banshee screaming 'Your bloody house is on fire, you stupid git!' at the top of its voice...)

Date: 2007-09-09 01:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Hahahaha! OMG, can you imagine? Heck, if the mirrors talk then the smoke detectors definitely should, too... *snert* I'm guessing it'd have a smoky voice... *giggles*
Thank, my dear!

Date: 2007-09-09 09:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gingertart50.insanejournal.com
Aaarrgghhh!

Would an old house (like 12 Grimmauld Place) have SENILE house-hold appliances like mirrors, smoke-detectors etc? *fights off insane plot-bunny*

Date: 2007-09-10 11:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Mruhahahah!

Date: 2007-09-08 11:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blpaintchart.insanejournal.com
Ha! I like wolf with ordinary sense of smell. And the fact that he cooks just like me is endearing, too!

Date: 2007-09-09 01:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Heh. I bet his sense of smell is great when he's in canine form, only we've seen no proof that that translates to extrasensory smell as a human, so I went with that. ;)

As for the cooking... no comment on how easy it was to come up with that idea. ;)
Thanks, my dear!

Date: 2007-09-08 01:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nimrod_9.insanejournal.com
Always like the twist!! I hope this means the other myths surrounding the size of potion master's nose are still true!!

Date: 2007-09-09 01:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Oh no! That's a well know fact, no myth involved there at all. ;)
Thanks, hon!

Date: 2007-09-08 02:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cordeliadelayne.insanejournal.com
Aw, cuteness :D

Date: 2007-09-09 01:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Yay! Thank you. :)

Date: 2007-09-08 03:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iamisaac.insanejournal.com
*g*

This is such a happy-making drabble :)

Date: 2007-09-09 01:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Yay! That's always my goal. :)
Thanks. *g*

Date: 2007-09-09 01:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Thank you. :)

Date: 2007-09-09 01:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calico_jynx.insanejournal.com
Haha, I love fics that dispel werewolf myths :D
*sniffs them* ya they haz gud flavor :*

Date: 2007-09-09 02:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Hehehehe. U R sense of smell is more betterer than theirs. ;)

*lick you* YOU haz gud flavor. *g*
*cuddles*

Date: 2007-09-09 07:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lackofmendacity.insanejournal.com
Ahahaha, poor blokes, and both completely useless. *giggles helplessly*

Cute to know they have to resort to Muggle devices. :D

Date: 2007-09-10 05:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Hahaha! I know, right? Two powerful wizards, and everyone thinks they have these incredible senses of smell, and it turns out they don't. *snicker*
Thanks, babe!

Date: 2007-09-10 05:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Yay, thanks, sweetie! *snuggles*

Date: 2007-09-10 08:08 am (UTC)

Date: 2007-09-10 11:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Heee, thanks! :)

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