Haiku!Tag Time
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alisanneWelcome to my new monthly game, Haiku!Tag.
Asevilly enabled suggested by shaddyr and smallhobbit, here’s the plan.
I’ll post a prompt word, and my own haiku, and you guys write your own based on the word or you can continue mine, whatever you like, in the comments.
And when we’re done, we can post it all at![[community profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/community.png)
poetic_hp.
That work?
And since this is all new, I’m open to suggestions.
If we wanna try other poetic forms, I’m up for that, too, just LMK. <3
Right, so, February Haiku!tag prompt is Valentine
Be my valentine.
Words he shan’t ever utter,
Yet shouted by deeds.
As a reminder: A Haiku is a form of Japanese poetry following a specific pattern consisting of seventeen syllables in total, divided into three lines of five, seven, and five.
As
shaddyr and smallhobbit, here’s the plan. I’ll post a prompt word, and my own haiku, and you guys write your own based on the word or you can continue mine, whatever you like, in the comments.
And when we’re done, we can post it all at
poetic_hp. That work?
And since this is all new, I’m open to suggestions.
If we wanna try other poetic forms, I’m up for that, too, just LMK. <3
Right, so, February Haiku!tag prompt is Valentine
Be my valentine.
Words he shan’t ever utter,
Yet shouted by deeds.
As a reminder: A Haiku is a form of Japanese poetry following a specific pattern consisting of seventeen syllables in total, divided into three lines of five, seven, and five.
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no subject
Date: 2018-02-01 10:26 pm (UTC)Though the valentine knows all
And clearly sees all
Tag to: And clearly sees all...
Date: 2018-02-02 05:48 am (UTC)his love like cinnamon hearts;
hot and sweet and sharp.
Tag to : hot and sharp and sweet
Date: 2018-02-03 05:51 am (UTC)Convey the depths of his love
Happiness assured
Tag to: shouted by deeds...
Date: 2018-02-01 11:17 pm (UTC)Expressed in rich indulgence,
chocolate roses.
Warm, sleepy lie-in,
Cuddled, reading, drinking tea
comfort in silence.
Re: Tag to: shouted by deeds...
Date: 2018-02-03 03:13 pm (UTC)Prey to misunderstanding
Actions are safer
Hermione has something to say to Ron...
Date: 2018-02-01 11:31 pm (UTC)romantic thrills are fleeting.
True love is a choice.
Fighting, anger, tears,
then reconciliation.
Love is an action.
How do you love me?
I count it in simple ways.
Just take out the trash.
Re: Hermione has something to say to Ron... Ron replies
Date: 2018-02-02 07:18 pm (UTC)And sometimes your ways seem strange
From how my folks think
Re: Hermione has something to say to Ron... Ron replies...Hermione responds
Date: 2018-02-02 07:24 pm (UTC)But romance cannot flourish
When the house smells bad.
Arthur has a word with his son
Date: 2018-02-03 03:27 am (UTC)*~*~*~*
Heed my lesson, son.
For matrimonial bliss
Compromise is key
Ron's reply
Date: 2018-02-03 05:16 am (UTC)But Dad! I’m the man
Wives promise to obey us
Vows are important
Arthur & Harry take Ron to task
Date: 2018-02-03 09:26 am (UTC)Peace and harmony.
Seek these, not obedience.
You must cherish her.
Harry, familiar with Ron's shortcomings while dating Hermione, gets straight to the point.
Don't be a dumb arse!
Order Hermione around?
You'll sleep on the couch.
Ron replies
Date: 2018-02-03 03:10 pm (UTC)So why does she challenge me
And throw up problems?
Harry's response
Date: 2018-02-04 03:16 am (UTC)She’s who you fell in love with
You knew going in
She’s brave and loyal
And she chose you above all
Can’t you let this go?
Back to Ron
Date: 2018-02-04 01:08 pm (UTC)But she needs to come to me
I've done what I can
Hermione's response
Date: 2018-02-04 10:19 pm (UTC)No need to pretend I’m not
And I love you, Ron
But things have to change
I’m your partner, not an elf!
Do you understand?
Ron again
Date: 2018-02-10 09:45 pm (UTC)It's not what I expected
And change can be hard
Hermione is relieved
Date: 2018-02-12 07:09 am (UTC)I promise to meet half way;
We're partners in this.
Change is difficult;
Nothing worthwhile is easy.
And... I love you, Ron.
no subject
Date: 2018-02-02 02:14 am (UTC)Your own haiku sets a fine standard: meaning through understatement.
no subject
Date: 2018-02-02 03:37 am (UTC)I do hope you join us! <3
no subject
Date: 2018-02-04 02:52 am (UTC)The hard work is the action--
why avoid the word?
Insecurity?
Fear of stepping 'cross a line?
Say it, Severus!
Fun! M.
Tag: Say it, Severus!
Date: 2018-02-04 03:22 am (UTC)Rather than tell all with words
You control my heart!
Yay that you came to play!
Tag: You control my heart!
Date: 2018-02-12 07:28 am (UTC)It's there in your eyes
The passion burning in you,
the heat in your touch.
But I wish, just once,
while your lips were on my skin,
you'd whisper the truth.
Re: Tag: You control my heart!
Date: 2018-02-13 01:01 pm (UTC)Swallowed by physical touch
Whatever I think
no subject
Date: 2018-02-12 11:54 pm (UTC)genius smug scientist never truly found love
makes exception for Atlantis only
Rodney, oh Rodney!
Date: 2018-02-14 05:58 am (UTC)He can hear her sing
she beckons him to touch her
lays her secrets bare.
Coaxing out the truth,
millennia of knowledge,
waiting just for him.