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Title: His Favourite Part
Author: [insanejournal.com profile] alisanne
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Severus Snape/Harry Potter
Summary: Harry comes out to his friends and Severus rewards him.
Word Count: 1280
Genre: Erotica, romance
Warnings: AU
A/N: Written for [insanejournal.com profile] dacro's birthday. Her requested pairing: Snarry, prompt: fingers. I hope you enjoy it, my dear! :)
Beta: [insanejournal.com profile] sevfan
Disclaimer: The characters contained herein are not mine. No money is being made from this fiction, which is presented for entertainment purposes only.


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His Favourite Part

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“But it came as quite a surprise, so what is it that made you realize?” Hermione persisted. She looked around, making sure no one was eavesdropping before continuing her questioning. Not that anyone could have heard their conversation over the music, but Harry appreciated her discretion.

She had that intense look that she got when trying to comprehend anything of interest, and Harry smiled, recognizing that he wasn’t going to be able to evade this topic. It was a good thing that he wasn’t trying to avoid this talk anymore, he reflected wryly.

“Is it really so hard to believe we’re together?” he asked quietly.

Ron, thus far silent, jumped in at that point. “Harry, you forget, we saw you in school with him. You hated each other. Hell, up until the last battle everyone thought you were mortal enemies.”

Harry inclined his head. “Yes,” he said. “That was true. Right up until he showed me the memories of all that he’d done for me.” His eyes grew distant as he tried to explain, and he missed the look Hermione and Ron exchanged.

“He had... feelings for my mother, and yes, that’s a bit weird, and at first I think that made it easier for him to see me as an extension of her, but by the war, he knew who I was, just me, not ‘the famous Harry Potter’, you know?”

Hermione nodded encouragingly. “Go on.”

Harry rested his chin in his hands as he continued. “He gave up so much for her and then for me. And...” He blushed as he continued. “...and there were some other memories that he showed me that I never shared with you. He’s been, well, noticing me for a while.”

Ron raised an eyebrow. “Um, mate? That’s sort of disturbing.”

Harry snickered. “Yeah, I suppose it would be, if I hadn’t been noticing him, too.”

“Mmm.” Ron looked doubtful, but nodded anyway, encouraging Harry to continue the story.

“So it was a mutual attraction, then,” Hermione said. “Was there a moment when you knew he was the one?”

Harry blushed. “That’s a bit private,” he said.

Ron held up a hand. “Yeah, okay, enough on that topic. Another ale, anyone?”

Hermione rolled her eyes. “I’m fine. You can get yourself something if you like.”

Ron nodded, relieved, and stood up to visit the bar. Hesitating for a moment, he finally clapped Harry on the back. “For what it’s worth, I’m glad you’re happy, mate,” he said. Then, sparing an amused look at his wife’s determined face, he grinned. “Hermione’ll get the details.”

As she was sputtering in outrage, Ron walked away. Harry smiled at their antics, pleased that they were taking this so well.

“He’s right, you know,” Hermione said once Ron was gone. “I would like details. Not those details,” she amended quickly as Harry’s eyes widened with alarm. “I mean things like, if you’re happy together and if he’s good to you. Although...” She blushed and continued doggedly on, “...if you want to tell me those details, I’ll listen.”

“I am not talking about our sex life,” Harry insisted. “Just know it’s... fine. Better than fine, actually. Much better. He’s amazing.”

Hermione grinned. “Which goes a long way towards ensuring happiness,” she said with a wink.

Harry laughed. “You’re almost as bad as Ginny was when I told her,” he said, shaking his head. “She wanted to know what my favourite body part of Severus was.”

Hermione giggled. “Oh, well now that you mention it, so would I!”

Harry rolled his eyes. “What is with you girls? Why are you so fascinated by two men?”

Hermione poked him playfully. “Not fascinated, just... interested,” she protested. “You know me, I like to know things. Plus, perhaps you could give me some tips to use on Ron.”

Harry smiled wickedly. “Right, well, my favourite part of Severus, if I have to pick just one thing is -- well, are -- his fingers.” He sighed, a wistful smile settling on his face. “They’re magical, for lack of a better word. He knows just how and where to touch me to make me melt. And he does this thing...”

Hermione smiled as Harry talked, thrilled for her friend. “That’s wonderful,” she said when he finally paused for breath. “It’s just so good to see you happy.”

“Right. Well, I’m back. No more dirty details, please,” Ron said cheerfully, placing a full goblet in front Harry and sipping his own.

Harry grinned and picked up the drink gratefully while Hermione began teasing Ron for his lack of Gryffindor courage because he left just as the discussion was getting interesting.

Sitting back, Harry relaxed. His friends were actually being quite decent about his relationship with Severus. He almost jumped when an elegant, yet invisible hand slid around the back of his neck.

“Well handled, brat,” a silky voice purred in his ear, and Harry’s eyes widened. He coughed to hide his consternation.

“Um, weren’t you two going to dance?” he asked a bit breathlessly.

Hermione nodded. “We were, but we don’t want to leave you all alone...”

Harry shook his head. “Oh, please! We’re in a crowded place. I’m fine. You go and have fun.”

Ron shot Harry a dirty look that made him snicker before Hermione dragged Ron away. When Harry was finally alone, he whispered, “What are you doing?”

“Eavesdropping,” came the smooth reply from his right. “This Invisibility Cloak is quite a useful tool.”

“Why don’t you take it off now?” Harry asked. “As you probably heard, they took it well, so you don’t have to hide anymore.”

“I’m not hiding, this is called gathering facts. I discovered several interesting things as I listened.”

“Severus...” Harry’s words trailed off in a moan as Severus’ hand insinuated itself under his robes, cupping his prick through his trousers.

“Like your appreciation of my fingers,” Severus murmured. “That was a good choice. Let’s see how much attention you can take from them before you tell your friends you’re leaving...”

Harry groaned as Severus somehow managed to undo his lacings and grasp his cock firmly. Spreading his legs, he leaned back and closed his eyes, thrusting upwards with small movements of his hips.

“What would they say if they knew I was here?” Severus continued, his voice curling around Harry and adding to his arousal. “What if I took this Cloak off and wanked you in front of all these people? Opened your robes and let them see you come...?”

With a choked cry, Harry shuddered and came, spilling his wetness over Severus’ clever fingers. He moaned as Severus’ tongue licked his earlobe.

“See you at home.”

Harry caught his breath for a few seconds before attempting to stand. Hermione and Ron were on their way back to the table holding hands and looking flushed and happy.

“Leaving so soon?” Hermione asked, sweeping curious eyes over him.

Harry nodded, avoiding her eyes and trying to straighten out his dishevelled robes. He was able to stand without holding onto the table after a few seconds. “I’m just missing Severus,” he said.

Ron snickered. “Oh, he’s got you whipped, mate,” he teased.

“Ronald!” Hermione scolded, and fortunately her disapproval masked Harry’s groan when a voice whispered in his ear, “Whipping? Mm, now there’s an idea...”

“Gotta go!” Harry knew he was being rude, but he was about to embarrass himself if he stayed there any longer. Kissing Hermione on the cheek and waving at Ron, he hurried away.

“So, it looks as if Snape really is good to him,” Ron said wonderingly.

Hermione nodded. “Seems so. He could be good for you, too.”

“What?!”

Hermione smiled. “Harry told me about this thing he does with his fingers...”

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Date: 2007-09-30 06:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gingertart50.insanejournal.com
*cackles*

Love it! Lucky Harry - and lucky Severus.

Date: 2007-09-30 08:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] venivincere.insanejournal.com
And, apparently, lucky Ron, too. :-D Nice work!

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Date: 2007-09-30 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] witchdragon.insanejournal.com
Deliciously wonderful!

Date: 2007-10-01 04:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Hee! Thanks, hon! *hugs* Glad you liked it. :)

Date: 2007-09-30 06:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kinwad.insanejournal.com
LOL...That was really great!

Date: 2007-10-01 04:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Thank you!
And that's a delicious icon. :)

Date: 2007-09-30 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drachenmina.insanejournal.com
“What is with you girls? Why are you so fascinated by two men?”

No comment!

This was lovely, hot and sweet - mmm, like a cup of hot chocolate...;-)

Date: 2007-10-01 04:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
*giggles*
Poor Harry will never understand how fascinating his sex life is to the women in his life, and to women in general. Heh.
Thank you for the lovely comments!

Date: 2007-09-30 07:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arielhime.insanejournal.com
I love it! *grins* Thanks for sharing!

Date: 2007-10-01 04:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Thank you! :)

Date: 2007-09-30 07:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] majmunka.insanejournal.com
I really cannot find out why we girls are so fascinated by two men but we are... Very much. I love teasing!Snape :D

Date: 2007-10-01 04:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
LOL. We are fascinated, it's true. Must be because they're so hot. ;)
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. *g*

Date: 2007-09-30 07:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cblue9.insanejournal.com
Harry wasn't the only rewarded, I guess Ron is getting is own reward from Hermione as well! Finger style!*LOL*
And a invisible cloak is a nice way of getting ideas for your sex life! XD

Date: 2007-10-01 05:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Hahahaha! Yes, Ron will prolly benefit from Harry and Snape's expertice. *g*
And yes, Snape is not above using whatever spying methods are neccesary.
Thanks, my dear! :)

Date: 2007-09-30 09:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sassy_cissa.insanejournal.com
delightful and fun! *hugs*

Date: 2007-10-01 05:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Yay! Thanks, luv! *cuddles*

Date: 2007-09-30 10:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schnu.insanejournal.com
“What are you doing?”

“Eavesdropping,” came the smooth reply from his right. “This Invisibility Cloak is quite a useful tool.”

“Why don’t you take it off now?” Harry asked. “As you probably heard, they took it well, so you don’t have to hide anymore.”

“I’m not hiding, this is called gathering facts.



*snickers* This is sooo~ Snape. Love it. And Hermione getting her kink out of it. *lol*

Date: 2007-10-01 05:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
LOL. After Harry's suggestions, Hermione may discover some new kinks. *g*
And I love hearing my Snape sounds IC, so thank you. :)

Date: 2007-09-30 10:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] winter_june.insanejournal.com
*smiles* Oh, fun and hot. Severus always brings out the best (actually, pun intended) and sometimes the worst of Harry. I suppose it's fate. :)

Date: 2007-10-01 06:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
LOL, yes. I thnk Severus knows his Harry and knows just what he'll respond to. *g*
Thank you!

Date: 2007-09-30 10:40 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Loved it!

honilee@LJ

Date: 2007-10-01 06:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Yay! Thanks so much. :)

Date: 2007-09-30 10:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] svartalfur.insanejournal.com
Severus using Harry's cloak to "gather facts" and to play with Harry - perfect.

Date: 2007-10-01 06:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
*giggles*
Yes, Severus has a fine sense of irony, especially given how Harry tormented him with that Cloak. ;)
Thanks, hon! And welcome back!

Date: 2007-10-01 12:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dracoluvah.insanejournal.com
You know I'm a sucker for invisibility cloaks!

This made me all warm and fuzzy!

Date: 2007-10-01 06:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
*g* Invisibility cloaks do make some things quite easy to do. ;)
I'm happy you enjoyed it, my dear! Thanks.

Date: 2007-10-01 12:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snarry_fan7.insanejournal.com
Most wonderful as always! So sneaky of Severus to listen in, but eavesdropping sure had some excellent results, lol.~Sophia

Date: 2007-10-01 06:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Hehehe. Indeed, Harry had no cause to complain about Severus' fact finding methods here. *g*
Thanks, Sophia!

Date: 2007-10-01 01:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jillypooh.insanejournal.com
Although...” She blushed and continued doggedly on, “...if you want to tell me those details, I’ll listen.” Hermione's a fangirl! And naturally she's using this as a learning experience. Clever girl.

Date: 2007-10-01 06:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
*snicker*
Hermione wouldn't turn down such a great chance to learn something! *g* And it doesn't hurt that Harry and Snape are so hot together. ;)
Thanks, my dear!

Date: 2007-10-01 01:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angela_snape.insanejournal.com
Wonderful! And Hermione is spot-on ... always learning!

Date: 2007-10-01 06:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Thank you! And yes, we can always count on Hermione to be curious. *g*

Date: 2007-10-01 02:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] felaine.insanejournal.com
Too funny and hot;
and much better than raindrops on roses
as our favorite thing.

Felaine

Date: 2007-10-01 07:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Hahahaha!
Well, there's nothing wrong with raindrops on roses or whiskers on kittens, per se...
I'm just more of a Snarry fan. ;)
Thanks, Felaine!

Date: 2007-10-01 03:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lalaith_niniel.insanejournal.com
Ohhh, Ron's gonna get lucky! (but, really, I don't want to know the details)

This was lovely, and Snape really is good for our Harry.

Date: 2007-10-01 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Hahahaha! yes, Ron's likely to get lucky. Good thing I have no plans to share the details, I suppose, hm? Hee.
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

Date: 2007-10-01 05:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ivylady.insanejournal.com
Oh that was hot. Harry should have expected it, though--never leave a Slytherin spy with an invisibility cloak. *grins*

Date: 2007-10-01 07:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
LOL. I think Harry knows better now. ;)
Thanks, hon!

Date: 2007-10-01 09:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] whatthefuckbenj.insanejournal.com
heh and I thought Hermione was suggesting a three- or foursome ;)

Date: 2007-10-01 07:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
LMAO!
I think she's still wrapping her mind around the concept of Harry and Snape as a couple. It would take a few years to get her to that point. *g*
Thanks, my dear!

Date: 2007-10-01 10:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] inamac.insanejournal.com
Mmm. Speaking as a hand fetishist (if there is such a thing?) I really did appreciate that. Such beautiful mental images...

Date: 2007-10-01 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Mmmm, yeah, there is such a thing. I adore hands. :)
Glad you enjoyed it, my dear!

Date: 2007-10-01 11:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eriador117.insanejournal.com
Oh, lucky Harry ;) Now about that whip, LOL!

Loved it :)

take care,
Annette

Date: 2007-10-01 07:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
LMAO! The whip is definitely a story for another day. *g*
Thanks so much, my dear!

Date: 2007-10-01 11:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mysticsong.insanejournal.com
That was awesome! OOoh... much love! :)

Date: 2007-10-01 07:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Yay! Thanks so much. :)

Date: 2007-10-01 01:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] abigail89.insanejournal.com
OH, very very nice. Though, I have to confess, I'm rather disappointed you weren't forthcoming on the details on what Severus does with those magical fingers. ;D

Well done!

Date: 2007-10-01 07:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
*giggles*
Sorry about that. Harry seems to have decided that some things are just private. ;)
Thanks, hon!

WOW!

Date: 2007-10-01 08:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dacro.insanejournal.com
Gah! This is such an awesome gift! THANKYOU! *hugs*

oh, man, everyone was great, and you pulled out what I love about each of them from Hermione's thirst for knowledge and need to make sure Harry's all right, down to Harry's bendable innocence and Severus' seasoned fingers. *claps*

And let's not forget Ron:
Ron held up a hand. “Yeah, okay, enough on that topic. Another ale, anyone?”
heh. perfect!

Thank you, again! *saves to memories*
When I get home from work, I plan to pimp it in my birthday post.
*loves*

Re: WOW!

Date: 2007-10-01 09:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.insanejournal.com
Yay! *bouncy* I'm so happy you enjoyed it, hon!
And Severus' fingers are, well, the stuff of many people's fantasies, I think. *g*

Thanks so much! And I'm honored to be in your memories! *hugs*
Happy Birthday! ♥

Re: WOW!

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