Drabble: Double Pleasure

[alisanne]

Title: Double Pleasure
Author: alisanne
Rating: NC-17
Challenge: #200: Double Drabble
Word Count: 200
Warnings: Highlight for warnings *slash, double penetration. *
Beta: sevfan
Disclaimer: The characters contained herein are not mine. No money is being made from this fiction, which is presented for entertainment purposes only.


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Double Pleasure

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Floating candles flickered, their glow reflected in the full-length mirror. To Severus’ blurred eyes, each dancing flame had a halo around it, but he ascribed that to the sweat dripping into his face.

He closed his eyes, the better to savour the sensations coursing through his body, but the rasp of silk against his over-sensitized skin, coupled with the incessant press of lips became too intense, and his eyes fluttered open once more, this time to meet the blazing gaze of his lover.

Severus’ breath caught and a moan escaped him. A hand cupped his cheek and he was forced to face his other lover. “Are you all right?”

A shuddering breath preceded his nod, and Severus swallowed thickly as the press of bodies resumed.

His eyes squeezed shut as the second cock nudged at his hole, and he obeyed the exhortation to relax, pushing back and breathing deeply as he was slowly, carefully, and lovingly breached.

The world fell away, and Severus felt suspended, loved between the two bodies that slid next to him, into him.

And when they all tumbled together in pleasure/pain/completion, Severus again opened his eyes to see himself reflected in glass and light.

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Comments

[severed_lies.insanejournal.com]

Yummy - he certainly deserves the love and care of his lovers. Sorry, this is a bit incoherent, as am I after reading this. :)

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

Oh yes. IMO, Severus deserves to be held and cared for and cherished. Guess it's just my fluffy core showing. ;)
And I think your comment is very sweet and not incoherent at all. *hugs*
Thanks!

[witchdragon.insanejournal.com]

Oh so hot!

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

Yay! Thanks so much, hon!
And yes, I think just about any activity involving Severus and candles and beds and other people is hot. ;)

[animehime.insanejournal.com]

Guh...nomnomnom! ;)

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

*giggles*
Fun babbling coment? Check.
Smexy icon? Check.
Yay, my job here is done. ;)
Thanks, sweetie! *g*

[lilithilien.insanejournal.com]

Very, very nice! I'm a sucker for that line between pleasure and pain, and I simply adore the care/concern they have for him as they take him there. Beautifully done!

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

Yes! I've been trying to explore that more in my writing (fluffy though I may be) and I'm thrilled that came across. :)
They are being very careful of Severus here, and he is soaking it up. *happy sigh*
Thanks so much, my dear!

[akuma_river.insanejournal.com]

Now it may be that I just have a lewd imagination but does this imply what I think it implies.

Severus again opened his eyes to see himself reflected in glass and light.

Is that or is that not saying that Sev's two lovers are himself? You know like that time-travel fic of Concepts were you have two or more copies of the same person?

I once a Snarry fic where Snape brought in his secret lover, himself from three hours before... Odd one that.

So am I right?

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

LOL! Wow, and again, my flist has a better imagination than I do.
I wish that had occurred to me, actually, but I'm afraid I simply wasn't that creative and I intended Severus' lovers to be two other people.
With all the speculation I think I'll leave the actual identities of Severus' lovers to the readers imaginations. *g*
Thanks, hon!

[winter_june.insanejournal.com]

As always, exquisite images, and soooo hot!

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

Thanks so much, my dear! *hugs*

[septentrion1970.insanejournal.com]

Who were his lovers?

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

LOL. I've decided to leave that up to everyone's imagination. Who do you think they were? *g*

[nimrod_9.insanejournal.com]

mmmm... wonderfully deliciously described!!

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

Yay! Thanks hon! *glee*

[hambares.insanejournal.com]

Ooh, the mental picture is exquisite!

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

Thank you, hon! :)

[snegurochka_lee.insanejournal.com]

Mmmm, I love DP! This was beautifully done. :)

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

Thanks so much, hon!
It's kinda funny that only a couple of years ago I was a bit squicked by DP and now here I am writing it, lol. In fact, I wasn't going to warn for it but I decided I prolly should just in case. *g*

[jillypooh.insanejournal.com]

This is scorching hot! But I'm with everyone else who's he with?

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

LOL. I've been saying that I would let it be whoever you want it to be, but in my mind your icon has it right. ;)

Thanks, hon! Glad you liked it. :*

[shiv5468.insanejournal.com]

Severus with himself? As the only person he trusts / cares about him?

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

If that's the way you'd like to see it then that's fine with me. ;)

[sassy_cissa.insanejournal.com]

This just makes me happy bouncy...see....

(http://photobucket.com)

Seriously, sooooo very hot and smexy. *adores*

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

Those smilies make me tired just looking at them. Meep!
Thanks, luv! *g*

[zephyr_macabee.insanejournal.com]

My goodness gracious *fans self* that is one hot double drabble.
Many kudos for you for getting so much passion, caring and smut in so few words.

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

Awww. *blushes* Thank you so much for the lovely comment! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. :)

[cblue9.insanejournal.com]

*Soooooo happily dead*

As The Beatles would say... "All you need is Love"!

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

Hee. Thanks, my dear!
And your icon is adorable! :)

[torino10154.insanejournal.com]

Gorgeous. Somehow DP tends to be, well, not as romantic. This felt like Severus truly has two lovers that love and care for him.

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

Yes, it took me a while before I felt comfortable writing DP, mainly because it always struck me as a painful thing to contemplate, but, as with just about every squick of mine, reading and writing in the HP fandom cured me of that. *g*
I like to think I manage romantic and loving DP, which to me seems the only way it would be acceptable outside of non-con, which I prefer not to write.
I happy that the love and care I intended his lovers to show Severus came through. Thanks so much, my dear! :)

[whatthefuckbenj.insanejournal.com]

Wow is this hot!! I don't think I've ever read a Snape sandwich with him in the middle, getting double penetrated!! (feel free to rec me some ^^) Since you're leaving the identities of the two other guys up to us I take three Severus' please!! XD

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

The beauty of this sort of drabble is you can be free to imagine whatever you wish. *g*
I don't know of many (or any) DP Snape fics, actually. But perhaps at bottomsnape they would know?

Thanks, hon! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

[lesyeuxverts.insanejournal.com]

mmmm, so hot! Love this one! :*

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

Aww, it was all because of you, sweetie! You wanted smex so you got it. *cuddles*

[jaddziadax.insanejournal.com]

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO:

[alisanne.insanejournal.com]

I'll take that as a compliment. ;)
Thanks, hon!